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Some people prefer to go to health clubs and gyms for health care. But some say that walking and climbing stairs are more effective. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

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Nowadays people are becoming more and
more
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more healthy
Health
conious
intentionally conceived
conscious
,
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,
 and are
therefore
 inclined to develop their
health
 through their physical exercise. Many go to gymnasium to
workout
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work out
 using machines
,
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 while others just maintain a physical active lifestyle by walking and climbing stairs
.
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.
 In
this
 essay I shall discuss both the perspectives of the arguments in depth
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.
 There are many advantages of going
gym
 and
health
 club centre. The instructor in
such
 places can guide you depending on your level of fitness and age
.
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.
In addition
, gyms and
health club centre
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the health club centre
health club centres
 gives you
motivation and atmosphere
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the motivation and atmosphere
 needed for
such
 physical fitness. Today's lifestyles are sedentary, and whatever walking or using the stairs we do
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,
 we cannot
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 our body's needs of
exercise
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the exercise
. Let us consider one example, when we go to gyms
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,
 we see other people exercising over there
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,
 which gives you
impetus
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the impetus
 to
workout
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work out
.
Finally
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,
 the equipment and guided
environment there
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environment, there
make
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makes
workout
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the workout
 easier.
On the other hand
, some find impractical to take out time and go to a separate place to do physical exercise. They believe that
health
 can be maintained by just grabbing simple
day
 to
day
 physical activities. They advocate that without going to
gym
 and
health
 clubs their physical fitness can be maintained.
For instance
, they walk over a short distance as well as briskly climb
staircase
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the staircase
a staircase
 and avoid
elevator
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the elevator
elevators
.
This
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,
 in itself, has a great advantages too. It saves additional time and expenditure needed to go to gyms. After considering the perspectives of both approaches, I believe that physical activity, coupled with a
day
 or two per week in
gym
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the gym
a gym
 is ideal. One cannot depend on just a routine physical
activities
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activity
. Joining the
gym
 just for the weekends would make the weekends something to look forward to
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 and one can focus those muscles or areas of
body
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the body
, which are not touched by simple
day
 to
day
 physical activities.
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