Prison is the best punishment for criminals. Discuss.

#prison #punishment #criminals

These days, we can see everywhere different kind of victims of

crime

. But what is the most effective method to

this

situation? Some people think that

prison

is the best punishment for criminals.

However I

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However, I

100% disagree with

this

opinion

. I will support my

opinion

with examples. The main reason of my

opinion

is that life in

prison

is better than life in freedom to some criminals who do not have accommodation.

For example

, in

prison

they have food three times per a day, they do not think about money to pay for living place, and they get clothes absolutely free. And while they live in

prison

, they do not think about money which they should pay for living placement. And

this

(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result

thus

all things, despite of their

crime

. The

second

reason why I disagree with

this

opinion

is that, in spite of their bad

crime government

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crime, government

think that they should sit in

prison

. In my view, it is not enough for them. Because if they killed someone they just sit in

prison

, but that person who was killed cannot return to life with their sitting in a

prison

. I think that they

also

should be killed by the government.

On the other hand

, they can study to not do a

crime

with sitting in

prison

For instance

, if they sit in one place every day do not do any activity or without walking out, without seeing a person who is close to them, he or she will miss anything which is in freedom. In conclusion, I want to say that

prison

is not enough for some criminals, who did bad

crime

. But for some criminals, it would be enough to do, not do anymore crimes.

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