Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from other sources such as the internet, television. To what extent, do you agree or disagree with their opinion.

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Thanks to the advanced technology, there is a huge range of resources available for learning in the modern society. As far as the importance of the right selection of knowledge is concerned, I agree with the argument that there will always be a place for
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in the school curriculum, despite the many benefits of the
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and other learning materials. Admittedly, I partly agree that other learning materials,
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and the media will benefit
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in a school and a University.
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will be extending their learning experience via various media, more specifically, if young
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learn about an earthquake, they can gain lively guidance, including 3-dimensional images and videos through searching
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online.
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, they can learn more effectively compared to the traditional way which is learning from the textbook with teachers.
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, especially, from the perspective of
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University
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required to search
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and deeper intelligence, the
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and television will be an essential learning method to them more than the
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professor’s lecture. They can easily access up-to-date info, especially thesis and article related to the topic that they are interested in, and
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gain valuable discipline fast and easily.
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, I, as one of the opponents of the view, hard to agree when considering the teaching ability of instructors and the perspective of young
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. On top of that teachers and professors are experts in each field, they have very accurate data about the subjects.
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, they have special skills to teach their
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, they give them homework to develop the student’s own abilities and
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assessments
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the acceptance of the lecture. Another reason worth mentioning is the intelligence on the
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is not accurate all the
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, researchers who looking for the appropriate intelligence should have 'data literacy' skills which are accepted only right and true schooling
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searching.
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, as far as the ability of young children is
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, they are not mature enough to distinguish right from
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wrong teaching, it will be harsh for them
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for an accurate message on the full with false and truth of the
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world.
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, I want to emphasize the way to learn from the ability on the
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or television cannot be applied to all
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. In conclusion, it appears that instructors with their quality and depth of philosophy, are set to remain an integral part of the syllabus. If used carefully and under supervision, the
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and television can be judged a useful supplement to it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • personalized attention
  • immediate feedback
  • structured learning
  • curriculum
  • dynamic interaction
  • engagement
  • cognitive skills
  • access to expertise
  • specialists
  • comprehensive
  • progressively
  • digestible
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