Many societies has its homeless people some people think that the best way to help them is give them money. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, people who do not have their own house and decide to live in

public space

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a public space

public spaces

can be found in many countries of the world. Some people suggest that giving the

money

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can resolve

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problem

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. I totally disagree with

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initiative because

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is not a sustainable way and the number of homeless people can increase from

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solution

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. Providing

money

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to homeless people is a temporary

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since we do not know the background of

individual person

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individual persons

individual people

the individual person

an individual person

. How they become homeless.

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, some people become homeless because of their

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

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.

drug

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Drug

addict,

alcoholic or

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alcoholic, or

gambler etc.

so

to a very great extent or degree

So

that, they loss all of

money

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and everything in their life.

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, giving

money

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to those people

do not help

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does not help

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problem

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from root-cause. If they do not change themselves, they will not realize the

valuable

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value

of the

money

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and do the same thing that they have done and end up with the same

problem

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.

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, giving

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is not only short-term

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solution but

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solution, but

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, increasing the number of homeless people. Using

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way to help homeless people without criteria and limitation lead to people who face the same

problem

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lack of motivation to earning their living by themselves and become homeless for receiving

money

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from societies.

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, some people have ability to work adversely they become homeless because of laziness.

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reason, if we still use

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way to tackle the

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, we will find homeless more and more in every

communities

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community

. To sum up, every

communities

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community

face

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faces

a

problem

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with homeless

people

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people, however

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, if societies only help them to live by

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money but

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money, but

do not

considered

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consider

the root-cause of the

problem

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, it will not a long-term

solution

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, homeless will increase continuously. We cannot get rid of

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problem

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in societies.