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Every country should have a free-health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, all the nations are trying to provide the
first
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 class medical services without any cost;
however
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, supplying advanced medical equipments are not included in those treatments since they are very costly. I strongly espouse to the notion;
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,
this
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 essay will discuss, why these services are necessary and must be free, with a logical conclusion.
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 and foremost, all the citizens of any country cannot afford medical
treatment
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. Most of the people are of the lower class and the middle class, who can't afford expensive private hospitals for their
treatment
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. The officials have to provide all medical facilities and infrastructure so that common people can bear the costs of the cure.
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, if an individual patient is visiting government hospitals for knee
treatment
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, he should only be charged with for consultation or the medicines, if surgery is recommended
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 it should be free of cost.
On the other hand
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, some of the medical equipments are too expensive to purchase and maintain for authorities,
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 as, CT scanners, Surgical Robots, PET scanners, Proton Bean Therapy system, MRI scanner and the list go on. These heavy machinery come with high prices, consecutively, not every medical centre can provide
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this facilities
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these facilities
this facility
. To conclude,
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 supplying some advanced gadgets for
treatment
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 can be tough for the government; still, in my opinion free medical services must be available for common people.
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