Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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commonly believed that there should be ‘tourist price ‘for international visitors in historical and touristic places. I partly agree with
this
statement and owing to many factors and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs.
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begin with, there is a conception that the prices of cultural and historical attractions had better be more expensive for foreign travellers than inhabitants. The reason of ‘two-tier price’ is much higher disposable income of tourists than
third
-world locals. As an example, the profit of overseas visitors is almost ten times more than that of local people.
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, tourists get used to travelling per year, whereas local residents cannot afford to go abroad even once in their lives.
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the property of having material worth (often indicated by the amount of money something would bring if sold)
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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