You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter say where and when the class will be held give reasons why you think your friend might be interested suggest a time and place to meet to discuss the idea

#class #college #friend #time #place #idea

Dear Susan, I am writing to you to share an exciting idea. I have come across

this

poster the other day about cooking class in our old college and I would really love for you to join me in the enrollment process. It says on the poster that the classes will take place at our local college, every Tuesday and Thursday between 6 and 8 pm, so right after work and in time to come back for dinner at home. I thought that was a good idea to share

this

activity why you as I remember you love cooking and discover a new way of cooking, it could be only exciting and profitable for you and maybe even be the instructor at the time, who knows? Anyway, let's meet tomorrow, April, the 3rd at our usual coffee place, around 2 pm if you are available. I am looking forward to assisting those classes with you, Amicably, Sarah

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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1Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

157 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

enroll
local college
cooking class
schedule
benefits
learning new skills
diverse cuisines
bonding
shared activity
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