Today , the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Nowadays, the quality of products sells become one of the most consumer goods to use many advertising. In fact, in the community what I see that in existence no needs to sell. In my opinion, In my opinion, I do not agree, why? In
this
era, online sells being one of popular in Indonesia, while teenagers can choose any kinds of business trend for their lifestyle. By using many advertising, people see make them want to get the new products.
This
also
a company struggle how their products can sell for society. The firm will always give new ideas to encourage people to buy from their poster like in social media or around the roads poster. Looking at more specific, Jakarta is the central business in Indonesia, many foreigners sell their goods in the mall.
This
means
encourage
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encouraging
people to buy the new
trend
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trendy
retail.
Moreover
, they like to see a new brand from other countries. A firm will always see how their products can be empty and deploy to the community.
Nonetheless
, in the phenomenon many
market
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markets
sell in the society.
Such
as, in traditional
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, not all people want to buy the goods from advertising. They will choose to go directly in the display and ask to the owner about the goods.
Furthermore
, for someone who do not have more money to buy what they see from advertising. People
also not
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also, not
believe with the ads because in the matter, the goods is not really good condition.
That is
why hey decide to join in the group and trying to pick the best goods for them.
This
also become
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has also become
also becomes
is also becoming
one of ways for people who do not trust about advertising.
In addition
, they think that from the poster is not
existence
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exist
when they buy in the
placeadvertise
. In conclusion, I definitely not agree the rising sales will encourage more advertising. Which for the poor society,
not trust
Suggestion
doesn't trust
what they see in the online media ads.
This
also
people will choose to buy in the retail and make they are easy to buy,
therefore
depend on the products.
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