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average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge.

#people #health #future #reason
It is
percieved
detected by instinct or inference rather than by recognized perceptual cues
perceived
 that
next generation
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the next generation
 will have
poor
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poorer
health
 status than what we have today. I stand by the statement that the present
healthcare
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health care
infrasture
 has been sabotaged, but if we go
on
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to
 reality check, the condition is even worse.
This
 essay shall discuss in detail about the same. Looking out from the present viewpoint of Covid-19, most of the
mohalla
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Mohalla
 clinics and government
infrastrure
was well developed
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were well developed
 but under-utilised. So with proper knowledge from experienced medical fraternity can be put
in
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into
 action
alongwith
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along with
 the government official's management skills that could help put to better symbiosis. Foreseeing
this
 ongoing situation, it would be fine to predict that future is in risky hands. The healthcare
facilities even
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facilities, even
 if available, it is not being utilised to its best for
genral public
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the general public
general public
.
Secondly
, consumer's understanding about
health
 and
health
 products is not
upto
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up to
 the mark. The gym culture is dominating the market. Nobody is ready to accept their dependence on
convinience
the state of being suitable or opportune
convenience
 foods, more of
refined food intake
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a refined food intake
the refined food intake
, low consumption of fruits and vegetable are
few major concerns
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a few major concerns
 that
ar
a unit of surface area equal to 100 square meters
are
 leading to rising incidence of cardiovascular diseases, obesity and hypertension much earlier than it used to occur before. Sedentary lifestyle, easy transport, no physical activity are important
contributor
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contributory
 to early onset of metabolic syndrome. Owing to the same, I
standby
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stand by
 the view point that with reduced diet quality and dynamic changes in lifestyle are primary contributors to early onset of ill-
health
. So it can be said that when our apple is sour we must cut it before it gets rotten.
Similarly when
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Similarly, when
 our defence mechanism is weaker than our enemy, we are prone to fail
even before even
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even before
 we can start.
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