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Living in country where you have to speak foreign language can cause serious social and practical problem to what extent do you agree and disagree with the statement

#country #language
Due to Global economic development, many people tend to travel to different nations from their Home town to develop their career or enhance their existing skills. The most common problem faced by them is getting assimilated with the local
language
. I completely agree with the statement and
this
 essay will present my views.
To begin
 with, There is Migration of people from one
country
 to another foreign
country
 are offering attractive benefits for immigrants because lack of particular skill in their
country
 or due to lack of population. On arriving in a new
country
, Immigrants face problem of expressing themselves because of lack of knowledge of the Regional
language
 leading to confusion.As local community doesn’t have knowledge of the worldwide Business
language
 I.e. English. Some local community members take advantage of
this
 situation and misguide the immigrants for access to basic facilities.
For example
, In outskirts of France, if Foreigners do not know French
language
 local society do not respond to immigrants in positive way and consider them as outsiders. In continuation, The migrants find it difficult to generate employment as many employers prefer the employees with the knowledge of local
language
 over and above the technical skills required for the job. To conclude, it is very challenging to settle down in overseas countries, if newcomer lacks the insight of the resident
language
. To support the migrants, the local authority should introduce session for the native
language
 to the settler, so that they can adjust to the new surroundings without any difficulty.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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