It is Generally Accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools. What do you think ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Exercise is very important for the normal physical and mental growth of children and adolescent. So, physical
education
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and sports should be
essential subject
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an essential subject
for all students in every
school
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. A healthy body contains healthy mind. Children and youth are the cream and pride of every nation So their mental, physical, educational, and
behavioral
of or relating to behavior
behavioural
improvement and proliferation are basic and primary concern of every institution. Sports, games
,
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physical activities and athletes keep their mind active, energetic and enthusiastic after the whole busy day with studies.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
sports, physical
education
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and extracurricular activities should be necessary for every student. After a research in American joint committee, the comparison between the results of two
school
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was done. In one
school
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, the class of physical
education
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is compulsory
to
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for
every student while in
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
school
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, no game and fun time
is provided
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are provided
to anyone After one month, the results of children of both
schools
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school
surprise everyone. Students who
also
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participate in their physical
education
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class give extraordinary results. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that exercise and physical activities are necessary to meet the physical and mental demand of
body
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the body
. Many students dissipate their negative energy in games and
atheltes
a person trained to compete in sports
athletes
so the outcome of their results
are
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is
far better than bookworm students.
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, students of military academy can cope with every difficult, crucial and troublesome situation. Their tough trainings increase their confidence, determination and courage in every field of life and keep their spirit high in every state. Endurance develops when kids regularly get aerobic activity.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • physical health
  • mental health
  • compulsory
  • instill
  • regular exercise
  • participation
  • teamwork
  • discipline
  • resilience
  • academic studies
  • concentration
  • focus
  • childhood obesity
  • motor skills
  • coordination
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