Some people think that it is important to construct new buildings rather than wasting money on maintaining old ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today many

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Today, many

people claim that too much money is being allocated

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for

the upkeep of older buildings that would be better utilised on modern infrastructure. In my opinion, though new buildings are more practical, old buildings are indispensable cultural relics.

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of all, those old

architecture

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architectures

tells about a

countries

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country's

countries'

efforts how they change situations for better,

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about the heroic people who did good to provide facilities for better generation.

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, The great wall of china is representing the dedication of the king and effort of the people to protect nations from other. The Tajmahal was built by king Shahjahan to express his love for her wife. Those

building

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buildings

are the wonders now as they are acting as inspiration for us, so it is totally meaningless not to protect them.

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, historical places are

main tourist attraction

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the main tourist attraction

of a country. Not only it represents ones culture and

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art, but

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sets a good tourist business. Millions of money

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is being added

to

countries economy

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the countries economy

a countries economy

for those historical monuments. So destroying them is a way of big economic loss. A historical building is a great object for architectural historian. Many lost civilization has come in front of us with all those buildings,

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act as a source of information for research work. There are many buildings in the world which is a wonder of engineering work that acts as inspiration for modern engineer.

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, replacing all old one with new buildings

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has been

just a big loss for whole nations both culturally and economically. And

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most important

those monuments are taking a small place of a county. If anyone wants to build new buildings that can be done in

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

places without destroying those valuable work. Those

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histories

inspired us and lead us

develop

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to develop

for far better way. With the economy that earned from

tourist

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tourists

a tourist

the tourist

is helping countries to progress.

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, history working silently to forward us. To sum up, a historical architecture is a

master piece

the most outstanding work of a creative artist or craftsman

masterpiece

of nations as well as a valuable asset. Government should be more dedicated and careful to beautify and protect them.