Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Other believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

PEOPLE TEND TO THINK DIFFERENT ON A SINGLE ISSUE AS SOME STATE THAT UNIVERSITY STUDENTS SHOULD BE GIVEN FREEDOM IN CHOOSING SUBJECT WHILE OTHERS POSSESS THE OPPOSITE MINDSET THAT THE COURSE MUST BE RELATED TO SCIENCE AND TECHNOLOGY. IN MY OPINION, FREEDOM OF CHOICE IS IMPORTANT IN
THIS
SCENARIO AS IT MOTIVATES ONE TO PERFORM ONE'S DUTY. ON THE ONE HAND, PEOPLE FROM ALL WALKS OF LIFE WANT INDEPENDENCE IN EVERYWHERE, AND IT IS APPLICABLE TO EVEN CHOOSING SUBJECT AT COLLEGE.
SUCH
FREEDOM ENCOURAGES A PERSON TO DEVOTE HIMSELF TO STUDY THAT PARTICULAR SUBJECT.
FOR EXAMPLE
, A STUDY CONDUCTED IN ENGLAND DICTATES THAT STUDENTS WHO ENJOY privilege IN DECIDING CURRICULUM AT UNIVERSITIES PERFORM BETTER THAN THOSE WHO DID NOT HAVE THAT LUXURY.
THEREFORE
, IT IS HIGH TIME FOR GUARDIANS AS WELL AS TEACHERS TO BE MORE CAUTIOUS REGARDING
THIS
ISSUE. IN CONTRARY, WE ARE LIVING IN THE ERA OF MODERN SCIENCE, AND PEOPLE FROM ALL WALKS OF LIFE ARE DEPENDENT MORE OR LESS ON STATE-OF-THE TECHNOLOGIES. THAT'S WHY MANY OPINES THAT TECHNOLOGICAL SHOULD BE GIVEN MORE PRIORITY AS THESE SUBJECTS WILL BE NEEDED MORE IN NEAR FUTURE.
FOR INSTANCE
, UNITED STATES OF AMERICA INITIATED A TERTIARY COURSE ON AERONAUTICAL ENGINEERING to attract MULTIFARIOUS NUMBER OF STUDENTS IN
THIS
PARTICULAR AREA. A FEW YEARS LATER, A TEAM OF THREE AMERICANS PUT THEIR FOOT ON MOON.
THEREFORE
, INTENSIVE CARE SHOULD BE GIVEN TOWARDS DECIDING SUBJECTS AND FUTURE DEMAND SHOULD BE CONSIDERED IN
THIS
CASE. IN CONCLUSION, I BELIEVE THAT
ALTHOUGH
APPLICABILITY OF A COURSE IS CRUCIAL, IT IS THE CHOICE OF CANDIDATE WHICH MATTERS THE MOST.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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