These days many people are interested in buying organic food even though it is often more expensive than conventionally produced food. What are some reason that people prefer organic food? Do you think it is important to buy organic food despite the higher price?

Although
chemical
food
is
high
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higher
priced than traditional cultivated
food but
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food, but
still many people prefer to buy it
.
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People
gives
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give
their
prefrence
a strong liking
preference
preferences
to natural
food
due to many reasons.In my opinion,
nevertheless
of higher cost organic
food
is much better than
conventional
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conventionally
produced
food
. People are interested in purchasing pesticides free
food
because of certain reasons.
Firstly
, inorganic
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, organic food
, in organic food
food
are
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is
hazardous to health as it causes many dangerous
deseases
an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning
diseases
disease
such
as cancer. Prevention is better than cure
,
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,
it is better to spend
little
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a little
more on daily bread rather than on costly medical treatments
.
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Secondly
,
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,
organic
food
is often more fresher than chemically produced
food
because it does not contain any preservatives and it is
usally
under normal conditions
usually
produced in small villages and is sold nearby
.
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Natural produced things are generally higher in cost
.
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People with high income can give priority to non
chemical
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chemical, food
food
but it is not affordable to poor people
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.
Moreover
the production of organic
food
is
comparitively
in a relative manner; by comparison to something else
comparatively
low to inorganic
food
so demand can only be fulfilled by consumption of both
.
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Undoubtedly the organic
food
is good for health but there are
number
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a number
of other things which can be followed
For example
daily exercise
,
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,
participation
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participating
in games
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In conclusion, contaminated
food
can not
can not
cannot
be a only factor for health issues
,
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,
changed lifestyles is
also
affecting people
.
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.
we
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We
can not
can not
cannot
fully replace inorganic
food but
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food, but
it can be reduced
.
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