Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from other sources such as the internet, television. To what extent, do you agree or disagree with their opinion.

Some sets of people argue that the students at
education
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educational
institutions learn better from
mentor
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a mentor
or professors rather than other options
such
as
internet
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the internet
and
television
. Personally at some extent I agree with the statement.
Nevertheless
, I
also
agree that
internet
and
television
is essential for the good
education
of students. From the
internet
students can search any valuable information regarding their study and can get
knowledge
of the subject.
For give
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Forgive
a clear example, if students
wants
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want
to study physics they can search on
internet
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the internet
and can get 3- Dimensions video regarding the topic. It is really helpful for better understanding as well as for easy learning.
In
addition there
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addition, there
are many sites like PUBMED, where students
can gets
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can get
free literatures and can review it.
Internet
and
television
is
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are
a
also
necessary for general awareness.
For example
, news channels, discovery channel and
many
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much
more. For the college as well as for the school project
internet
is very useful. Admittedly, I agree that
education
staff can
tech
impart skills or knowledge to
teach
better than
internet
or any other options. Students can educate more
by
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of
from
them because they have enough
knowledge
of
perticular subject
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particular subjects
particular subject
a particular subject
and can guide at good extent
to
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for
students. Teachers
is required
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are required
for the
assesment
the classification of someone or something with respect to its worth
assessment
of the students
as a result
they can evaluate themselves. Teachers can help the students
for
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in
searching the right information on
internet
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the internet
so they can save their time from searching wrong sites. At
lastly proper guidance
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the lastly proper guidance
of mentors is necessary for the development of
knowledge
of the students. In conclusion, I agree that students at
education
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educational
institutions learn better from the teachers,
however
internet
and
television
is
also
a
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an
essential
tools
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tool
for the advancement of
knowledge
of students.
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