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The number of children that read for fun has dropped dramatically in recent years. What are the reasons for this? How can we encourage children to read more?

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It cannot be denied that reading habits in the children's are decreasing day by day. Some individuals think that, nowadays kids do not like reading stuff for their enjoyments, and the percentage of readers are getting low in the present year.
This
 treatise will shed light on the causes of
this
 situation, and going to give solutions to tackle
this
 problem.
To begin
 with, the main reason behind that, because of the hectic schedules of the offsprings's, they are not able to give
time
 to read the fun stuffs. In
this
 era, study pressure becomes a major issue for children's, and undoubtedly, they spend their most of the
time
 with books.
Therefore
, infants prefer to have physical games as well as indoor games,
instead
 of reading more storybooks, in their leisure times.
Secondly
, advance facilities given by parents, makes kids more attracted towards the others kind of free activities,
also
 they get more attracted by them.
For instance
, my daughter, she has numerous devices
,
Accept space
,
also
 which she used for her free
time
.
Hence
, she never put interest in reading for entertain. There are some solutions which really can help to motivates kids.
First
 of all, the right atmosphere by their nurtures will definitely make affects. Kids mostly learns good or bad habits from their home,
as
Suggestion
at
 home is the main place, where they spend most of
time
, when they see their parents in reading position,
then
 fore sure they start intimate them.
As a result
, they follow them, and start indulging in reading.
Secondly
, schools should provide those books or novels, which kids can read in the summer or winter vacation. In conclusion, with the advent of technology, not only children but parents
also
, most of the
time
 busy in their lives.
Consequently
, kids are not able to understand the actual value of the reading books.
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