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In the modern world, the image is becoming a more powerful way of communication than the written word To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is an opinion asserting that in recent years visual communication is more effective than written
type
. The issue of weather which
type
 is the best is certainly controversial one. I completely agree
this
 kind of modern communication would be a bright tool in
this
 fast-changing world. In what follows, I will explain the main reasons to justify my position. The
first
 exquisite point to be
menthioned
make reference to
mentioned
maintained
 is that visual interaction conveys the facial states and tone of voice. To put it another way, the concept of a message is extremely influenced by the
emotion
Suggestion
emotional
 behinds its words and a large percent of a meaning rely on how the sentence would be expressed.
This in
Accept comma addition
This, in
 turn, contribute to
more approoriate way
Suggestion
a more appropriate way
more appropriate way
more appropriate ways
 of
transfering
transfer somebody to a different position or location of work
transferring
 ideas. A good illustration of
this
 is that about 95% of people who participate in a survey
carring
feeling and exhibiting concern and empathy for others
caring
curing
 by Cambridge University find out the video call more effective than text message to serve a
porpuse
an anticipated outcome that is intended or that guides your planned actions
purpose
 of sharing their views with others. Another prominent reason in favour of
optical
Suggestion
the optical type
type
 of communicating is the simplicity of
this
 method.
That is
 to say,
writting
the act of creating written works
writing
 sentences is more time-consuming than
saying
disclosing unintentionally
telling
 them.
Therefore
, in
this
 busy world most of people, who usually complain
of
Suggestion
about
 the shortage of time, prefer the easiest means of connecting appliance.   To conclude, I strongly reaffirm my position that image
type
 of communication play a very important role of
this
 modernised society in order to facilitate traditional functions for humans and
also
this
 issue is likely to become more important in the future because of the advantages provided for people.
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