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children should always listen to parents' advice. to what extend do you agree?

#children #parents #advice
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While it is no
doubt
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 that parents are playing a considerable
role
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 in their children's
life
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. People
claim
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 that kids should always take the
advice
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 of their parents. I disagree with
this
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 because teachers and
society
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 members,
both
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 are playing a vital
role
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. And
also
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 children spend most of
time
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 with them. While it is no
doubt
Use synonyms
 that parents are playing a considerable
role
Use synonyms
 in their children's
life
Use synonyms
. People
claim
Use synonyms
 that kids should always take the
advice
Use synonyms
 of their parents. I disagree with
this
Linking Words
 because teachers and
society
Use synonyms
 members,
both
Use synonyms
 are playing a vital
role
Use synonyms
. And
also
Linking Words
 children spend most of
time
Use synonyms
 with them. While it is no
doubt
Use synonyms
 that parents are playing a considerable
role
Use synonyms
 in their children's
life
Use synonyms
. People
claim
Use synonyms
 that kids should always take the
advice
Use synonyms
 of their parents. I disagree with
this
Linking Words
 because teachers and
society
Use synonyms
 members,
both
Use synonyms
 are playing a vital
role
Use synonyms
. And
also
Linking Words
 children spend most of
time
Use synonyms
 with them. To conclude, it is no
doubt
Use synonyms
 that parents are playing a considerable
role
Use synonyms
 in their children's
life
Use synonyms
. People
claim
Use synonyms
 that kids should always take the
advice
Use synonyms
 of their parents. I disagree with
this
Linking Words
 because teachers and
society
Use synonyms
 members,
both
Use synonyms
 are playing a vital
role
Use synonyms
. And
also
Linking Words
 children spend most of
time
Use synonyms
 with them.
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