Chigozie Ogbonna: Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

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In modern days, the internet plays a vital role
on
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in
many individuals' daily lives
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the many individuals' daily lives
which contribute the rise in the popularity of purchasing different products or services online
such
as
boos
bright-colored; a float attached by rope to the seabed to mark channels in a harbor or underwater hazards
buoys
, plane tickets, and groceries.
Although
it is believed to contribute various benefits, I personally think that there are
also
several drawbacks that need to be considered. The positive and
negtive
characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
points of
this
will be outlined in
this
essay.
To begin
with the benefits of online payment, the
first
and most significant point is the convenience of buying different products or services. Due to the traffic congestion that has become worse these days, numerous customers opted to
do
engage in
make
the online shopping at home
instead
of spending an immense amount of time sitting in the traffic.
Consequently
, they are able to schedule their plans throughout the day more effectively as well as eliminate the stress and anxiety that they
probably experience
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have probably experienced
during the time when being stuck in the traffic. A wide range of new released goods
such
as clothes and books that are is
also
one of the benefits of online shopping since individuals only have to turn on their computer and surf the internet through different online shops, they don't have to spend a great deal of energy on walking from shops to shops or waiting in a queue at a mall just to buy a pair of sneakers. Despite the aforementioned
ponits
railroad track having two movable rails and necessary connections; used to turn a train from one track to another or to store rolling stock
points
, there are
also
several drawbacks to
considered
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consider
. Due to the advancement of technology, cybercrime is becoming more and more common in today's world. The security of personal information
that is
uploaded online,
such
as the bank account
that is
linked to a profile for purchasing a plane ticket, is not always 100% protected,
thus
the identity theft can possibly happen. There has been numerous cases when an immense amount of money is taken from some certain accounts
everthough
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ever though
the
ower
(law) someone who owns (is legal possessor of) a business
owner
has not done any money transfer. In conclusion, while online payment contributes numerous benefits for individuals, there are
also
some negative points that need to be put under the
consideraton
the process of giving careful thought to something
consideration
since it can lead to
further
issues, especially something
that is
financial
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financially
related. If the government
have
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has
a better policy on the online security, various individuals will perhaps be more assured and safe while shopping online.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience
  • Vast array
  • International sellers
  • Price comparison
  • Impulse buying
  • Overspending
  • Tactile experience
  • Satisfaction
  • Potential for fraud
  • Security concerns
  • Packaging waste
  • Emissions
  • Centralized distribution
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