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Traffic is a problem everywhere in the world. It creates congestion, and noise. In response to this problem, some cities charge an expensive tax to cars in downtown areas. Do you agree with this tax?

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transportation
Suggestion
Transportation
 congestion is one of the major problems in virtually every city. In an attempt to tackle the over-abundance of vehicles commuting on the streets, it is recommended that heavy cost should be imposed on cars in the city centre. While
this
 solution can be justified to some extent, I believe that there are other optimal solutions which can minimize gridlock problems. On the one hand, I hold a belief that a hike expense
on
Suggestion
of
 cars may decrease the rate of service jam and level of noise pollution. Should the rate on cars increase, it may cut the number of private vehicles on roads.
This
 interns can decrease noise and congestion problems.
However
, it may lay a financial burden on commuters working in certain areas which are far away from the centre and inaccessible to public shipment
such
 as countryside and rural areas. Despite a high-duty rate, they still need cars to travel to work. If their work is required to travel several times, they may encounter financial difficulties because of the heavy toll charge.
On the other hand
, I contend that a more effective measure that could be taken to eradicate these problems resulted from
transportation
 is a government subsidy for public
transit
 services. Governments can improve public
transit
 by having more public
transit
 available, making it more punctual and reducing the price of the tickets. Were
this
 solution to be applied, numerous citizens would use public
transit
 systems as primary means
transportation
, which ultimately reduce the level of pollution and ease the increasing congestion on roads. To conclude, while hiking levy on cars can help to remedy
transportation
 problems to some degrees, I am certain that there are better and more effective solutions to solve these problems than
this
 solution.
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