 What could be done to encourage people to buy local products? An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?

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Advancement in technology has changed the lifestyle of most the people's and their way of exploring stuff, whether it is banking, booking some trip or shopping, it can be done online by simply searching best options available on the internet. It has impacted the local markets a lot, but some people think shopping online is way better than visiting a shop. In my opinion, shopping online has opened the door to shop anything from anywhere. There
are
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a humungous range of
produce
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products
are available online which might not be available in the local retail, even sometimes it is difficult to decide which one we should buy.
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, sometime the produce delivered might not be of the best quality as shown on the shopping website.
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, if we buy furniture from the website, it might not be of the exact same grade what we are expecting.
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, if we visit the local
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market, we
market market, we
can properly examine the product before spending money.
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to that, we can help local market
to grow
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grow
more economically strong and with that they can increase their product variety.
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, if
product
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the product
is not good you can quickly and easily return or exchange. Whereas for online shopping you have to go through some documentation and wait for the refund or exchange approval, even if your refund is
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accepted, you
are not sure if you get your credit back or not.
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, visiting local
market we
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market, we
can rejuvenate ourselves from day to day busy work life. To recapitulate, it is inevitable to shop
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online, but our
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choice should be local products. Local vendors should have to do more advertisement of their products and provide some seasonal or regular discounts to attract more buyers.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • local economy
  • sustainability
  • supply chain
  • artisan
  • homegrown
  • locally sourced
  • community spirit
  • consumer behavior
  • environmental impact
  • economic growth
  • job creation
  • awareness campaign
  • strategic partnership
  • brand trust
  • quality assurance
  • transparent sourcing
  • incentives
  • loyalty programs
  • farmers' market
  • local fair
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