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In today’s time the internet is making it easy to study online from home. Some people prefer online courses to study and they think it is better. Others prefer classroom education. Discuss both views and share your opinion

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In recent times, the Internet has given means for a lot of things to be easy including learning. Some people are of the opinion that online learning is better while, others, believes that classroom education outweighs the Internet. In my opinion Face to Face learning goes a long way in helping students. I agree that classrooms education has more benefits than online learning. On the one hand, in the Classroom, the
Teacher
 gets to see the students and read their body languages.
For example
, when students are tired the
Teacher
 sees it from their body movement and knows when to give them a break. The
Teacher
 gets to familiarize with the students. Classroom learning helps the students to know one another, make friends and ask questions when confused. Learning in school goes a long way because things around us reminds us of what we have learnt. Students in the classrooms, tend to remember some vital information that the schoolteacher, said by memorizing what really happened that day. What did the
teacher
 talk more about the topic. Schools are built in a conducive style to make learning interesting and easy with less noise whenever teaching is going on.
Secondly some
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Secondly, some
 students prefer staying at home and learn over the internet. They get to tune in, sit back and watch the lecturer teach. Technology has made it easy that they are just one click away. It is stress free and much conducive.
For instance
,
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 waking up late and running to catch a bus for a 9:00 AM lecture and still get held by traffic and might miss the lecture. Learning over the Internet is quite easy because it contains a wide range of students and it makes it easy for the
Teacher
 and students. On the whole, Face to Face learning has been a traditional method of education and cannot be overlooked. Some people may not have access to strong network perceptions and needs to be in class.
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