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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study/work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter: describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to study/work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to address the issues, which I am facing in my shared accommodation. I am facing very disappointing situations throughout the day, which is leading me into distress.
Firstly
, I am unable to concentrate on my
homeworks
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homework
 due to the sound played on her mobile frequently.
In addition
, she stays awake all night with the lights switched on and inviting friends over.
Thus
, I am unable to have a good night's sleep,
moreover
, I am finding
backbreaking
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it backbreaking
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 to wake up early for my classes. I wouldn't blame my roommate, as
its
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it's
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 her independence, perhaps, I would relocate myself to a suitable apartment. I would highly appreciate
,
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 if you could look into
this
 matter and arrange another suitable accommodation for me. I will be glad to have a bedsit suite for myself so that, I can have a good night's sleep and an enabling environment for my studies. I am hoping to shift as early as possible as my
first
 semester is about to start in three weeks. Thanking you, Nicola Thomas
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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