Nowadays, the number of obese children is increasing at an alarming rate. What are some of the causes of this increase and how can the problem be solved?

Child
obesity
is one of the most worrying causes today.
This
problem is
causes
Suggestion
caused
by a number of factors
such
as eating a lot of fast food and people living a sedentary lifestyle. But there is still a way to deal with children's
obesity
if parent's responsibility and attend more activities.
Firstly
, the causes of
obesity
in children is very inactive. Children are very passive and not want to go out because they always have electronic devices
such
as phone, laptop, television...
For example
, kid now prefer watching
movie
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a movie
the movie
on the bed or sofa, they don't like playing outside and when they watch TV, they often eat
snack
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snacks
or drink soft drinks. That long
habits
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habit
lead
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leads
to
obesity
.
Beside
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Besides
, a simple way to reduce excess body fat is to
excercise
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
. Children should be directed to
by
obtain by purchase; acquire by means of a financial transaction
buy
suitable sports that they like to apply.
For instance
, sports like skipping, swimming, running or
brish
walking for about 60 minutes a day. The
second
causes of
obesity
in children is their family, especially their parents. Every parent loves their children so they always bring the best to their children. But they do not know the health and body balance for their children. They always let their children love to eat fried foods, sweet things
such
as chicken KFC, cakes, candy... And to solve
this
cause
an occurrence of something
case
is the parent's responsibility.
Parent
Suggestion
The parent
A parent
should join
nutridition
(physiology) the organic process of nourishing or being nourished; the processes by which an organism assimilates food and uses it for growth and maintenance
nutrition
courses and give children healthy food.
For instance
, parents give children advice and remind children limit energy- rich foods like oil, candies, starches. The goal is for the
first
few months to control the die does not increase or increase 0,5kg/months. In conclusion, the increase in the number of obese children
is certainly worry
Suggestion
certainly worries
, especially children are the most obese part of the popular.
However
, taking measures to address the above causes,
its
the thing named or in question
it
can help ensure that the
next
generation
grow
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grows
up healthy.
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