Advertisements are now targeting children. What will be the problems and what can be done ?

These days, an increasing number of people are concerned about the fact that
advertisement
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are now targeting children. The essay will
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suggest that the biggest
problem
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cause by the
advetisements'
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisements
target which are children is can ultimately make
children defiant
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children, defiant
child's defiant
child's child's defiant
children's defiant
and distracting them from physical activities,
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submit close watch on
advertisement
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in order to make sure suitable content for children. The
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main obstacle is that advertising food and drinks that have high levels of fat and sugar causes child obesity.
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is due to children cannot understand the difference between healthy food and fast food, they are attracted to the
colorful
having striking color
colourful
pictures in the
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which very detrimental
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to
their health.
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in addition
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, some ads show dangerous stunts.
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, it is clearly mentioned that the children should not imitate those stunts, they do not pay attention to that part and try to
perfome
carry out or perform an action
perform
those stunts and get hurt.
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, there are a variety of kids who are prone to violence and fighting as character in "Tom and Jerry". Another notable
problem
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is little children pester their parents to buy the
producrs
commodities offered for sale
products
advertised on TV and social media. Children disturb their parents to buy the
item but
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item, but
if parents cannot provide the things they want, children will
being
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be
stubborn. There are a
numorous
amounting to a large indefinite number
numerous
of effective solutions to the
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of
advertisement
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' target. One effective solution to deal with
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is for
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of consumerism, advertising could promote creativity and values
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as friendship and honesty.
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, some countries have already banned advertising targeted at young children.
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, parents need to explain the difference between the actual and the cartoon programmes;
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, they can know what profitable for them and what they should avoid.
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, parents should supervise the time they spend on watching TV,
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proper
selective
advertisement
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and create more outside activities. In conclusion, while
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are targeting children is a social concern
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in
our society, there are two ways to eliminate
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, which is
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certain
to arise in future.
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, society must ensure steps are taken to prevent
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problem
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from deteriorating
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.

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