In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food, clothing, or medicine. To what extent do you agree or disagree? disagree?

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These days, the use of animals for some purposes
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as food, clothing items, and medicine is prevalent. While others argue that it should not take advantage of animals for those intentions, I partly agree that people should take advantage of animals rightly. On the one hand, there are good reasons to believe that things made from animals are essential for humans.
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, animal products bring more nutrition and protein than organism products.
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, tuna or salmon are rich in vitamin and omega-3, which is good for human health, especially pregnant women so that it could help babies have a better brain and healthy body.
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, animal testing contributes to life-saving cures and treatments. Thanks
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testing from monkeys and mice, researchers have developed many medical breakthroughs
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as peanut allergy, brain cancer, and tumour.
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, it could save many patients are suffering those diseases.
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, I agree with those who claim that we no longer need to use items from animal parts.
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, animal’s exploitation for food and clothing is becoming over and inhumane.
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, behind the delicious
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plates are the force-feeding technique or the peeling of crocodile skin to make luxury handbags, which are worthy of condemnation.
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, there is a big difference between animal bodies and humans being.
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, animal experience results would give wrong answers that might lead to severe disasters if doctors did not carefully check within the studies. In conclusion, it seems that it is necessary to treat animals for appropriate purposes, but badly using animal activities should be judged and banned.
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