Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today, because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. Do you agree or disagree
Although
few people felt that mobile phones are affecting for social interactive
. Present condition the technology Suggestion
interaction
interactions
are
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is
steadly
growing and developed at a steady rate or pace
steadily
new variety
of Suggestion
a new variety
new varieties
medium
, Suggestion
mediums
media
thus
decrease the face to face interaction. Modern technology
play's major role in Suggestion
technology's
this
less social intraction
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interaction, such
interaction such
interactions such
such
as mobile phone
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. This
essay discuss
about modern technology to compress the conversation among the people.
Present Suggestion
discusses
technolgy
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
technologies
are making
the Suggestion
is making
people
laziness. Nowadays Suggestion
peoples
person's
peoples'
variety
of Suggestion
a variety
the variety
phone
available in Suggestion
phones
market
and Suggestion
the market
that
is the price
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the price is also
also
considerably cheap
. So all are using the Suggestion
cheaper
phone
and maximum relies on this
one. Additionally
the network price very cheap for the call. All the people does not like to meet and immediately call and convey the massage as instantely
.
Earlier the without delay or hesitation; with no time intervening
instantly
peaple
directly go to wish and greeting, Presently only sending the message (plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
peoples
instead
of directly go to the event.Furthremore its
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Furthermore, it
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Furthermore it
Furthremore it
today
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to day
life
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life, such
such
us
relative bond and to the same degree (often followed by 'as')
as
freindship
. Nowadays all persons are working in the state of being friends (or friendly)
friendship
accross
the country so all to the opposite side
across
are convey
the message Suggestion
are conveying
have conveyed
throgh
from beginning to end
through
phone
, This
impact to reduce the relative bond between parents and child.
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Secondly, many
diffrent
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different applications
different application
a different application
application
. The application
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facebook
, it is Suggestion
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connecting
to the all Suggestion
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peaple
and (plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
peoples
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easily
to Suggestion
easy
intract
act together or towards others or with others
interact
instruct
accross
the world. So all are thinking no need to meet directly and better to chat with social media or chat medium. Present day many to the opposite side
across
peaple
are addicted some other (plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
appliecation
and spending more time on those the act of bringing something to bear; using it for a particular purpose
application
applications
application
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applications
such
as games and photo shop. It is affecting their valuable time and reducing their innovative thinking way.
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to in accordance with truth or fact or reality
really
relay
rely
distace
the social interaction. Suggestion
destroy
destroys
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of using the cell Suggestion
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ways, such
such
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