Some people prefer to live in hot climates. Whereas others love the lifestyles in countries with cold climate. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Climate
circumstance has a direct relation to people's moods in which scientists believe that people who are living in the tropical regions are happier than the others because of the sun sunlight and relevant energies. While many others have differing differed idea about it. In my perspective, tolerate cold
weather
is really easier than hot and wet
weather
. The remarkable subject about tropical
climate
is energy discussions and treatment features. Truly many beneficial vitamins that the most important about it is vitamin D is supplied by sunshine. The lack of
this
vitamin causes the serious disease
such
as osteoporosis and depression that emerge in old ages. As well as the reason of being the sources of nourishing food, in countries with warm
weather
and dry
climate
the infectious diseases is not steady. So most of the people prefer warm and dry
climate
with comfortable and colourful dresses
instead
of thick and woody ones.
Although
the warm
weather
is pleasant for someone, but the pictures views with the mountains covered by snow never appear in it. How much take distance from the equator to pole side, will testify the
climate
change from warm to cold. The cold and wet
climate
, with a blooming agriculture industry
that is
able to supply almost the many requires of agricultural products throughout the world.
Also
, livestock industry with animals can nourishment the best pasture is another reason for choosing cold
climate
countries.
Moreover
, the most beautiful nights in at Christmas are one of the absolutely wonderful experience that everyone could have. I am who prefers to be in the cold
weather
countries range of Scandinavian countries. These countries with low population are one of the best places to live. Quiet cities, no traffic, no sweat dresses, no busy in public transportations and no noisy in there. To sum up, our planet has different
climate
change and it completely related to the geographic circumstances and both of cold and warm
weather
have their specific advantage and disadvantages in terms of life situation.
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