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Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed.what is the reason for doing this?

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In today's world, teenagers are influenced by peer pressure.Many families have no idea how their children spend their time while parents should be more involved with their children's bring up.I am convinced that
this
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an issue
 have pros and cons
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therefore
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i
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discuss
both
 views.
to
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To
 begin with, families in many countries have more tendency to have fewer children and they live in a small nuclear family rather than large extended family.
consequently
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Consequently
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it is more difficult to raise
enormous family
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an enormous family
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however
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However
, internet absorb
teenager but
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teenager, but
 parents have to try slide change their routines and have deeply contact.
and
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And
 other hand, mothers and fathers can play crucial role
on
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in
teenager's life whereas
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a teenager's life, whereas
a teenager's life whereas
the teenager's life whereas
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television and the internet become the main influence on them.
apart
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Apart
 from
this
; children spend more time with friends or surfing the internet since
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the technology's atmosphere
technology's atmosphere
 is extremely mesmerising.
as
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As
 a result
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,
juvenile
deliquency
nonpayment of a debt when due
delinquency
 is on the increase.
so
to a very great extent or degree
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both
 parents should have
proffesional
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professionally
professional
work
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worked
.
from
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From
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mother
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the mother
mothers
 should stay at home and clean and look after their children and the father should be the bread winner of the
family but
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family, but
 on the one sight it is more helpful male
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and
 female share these responsibilities and they contribute equally to children
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cooking and cleaning. To recapitulate, children and their parents seem to be less contact together and nowadays
both
 parents of work full-time to
persue
carry out or participate in an activity; be involved in
pursue
 their children's ambitions so they spend their leisure time with friends or surf on via
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Additionally
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technologycal
based in scientific and industrial progress
technological
 advance is able to play
vital role
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a vital role
vital roles
 on children's behaviour.
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In
 my opinion
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although
 family has
both
 negative and positive
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impacts
 on the successful way of child
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but the benefit of providing
awereness
having knowledge of
awareness
 outweighs any negative..
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