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Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Nowadays there are different ways which can be used for the process of teaching children to read. There are two types of people when it comes to ways of developing children’s skills. The
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 group thinks that only modern ways like gadgets should be used, and the
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 one insists on usual printed books. In
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 essay both sides of
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 debate will be
analyzed
examined carefully and methodically; broken down for consideration of constituent parts
analysed
 before a record conclusion is drawn. On the one hand, many believe, that only devices should be used for teaching a child to read.
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, they
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 special applications for remembering letters and sounds and later add reading electronic books.
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 of
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 way of teaching, children learn all necessary information in a game
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 and know how to
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 different devices and technologies.
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, it’s understandable, why
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 point of view has garnered support.
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, many parents prefer to
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 familiar printed books to learn their children to read.
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, parents can pronounce letters and show them in bright-
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having color or a certain color; sometimes used in combination
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 books at the same time.
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 way of learning gives an opportunity for a child not only to develop reading skills, but
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 to get used to the real printed books, So it’s
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, why so many parents
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 way of learning reading. Following
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 look at the varying opinions regarding
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 debate, it is felt, that people can
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 all possible ways to learn children how to read or even mix them. But the main thing is to make them love reading overall. Doing our best, we can have new generations, which will love reading and it’s much more important than the ways of teaching.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • online reading materials
  • printed materials
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • technology
  • convenience
  • interactivity
  • accessibility
  • visual appeal
  • physical books
  • parental guidance
  • digital skills
  • screen time
  • learning experience
  • personal preference
  • comprehension
  • critical thinking
  • creativity
  • word recognition
  • grammar
  • vocabulary development
  • reading habits
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