more and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. what are the reasons for this? what can be done to solve this problem?

It is true that

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a large number

large numbers

of animals are

extincting

nowadays and part of them have already died out.

This

is mainly because of poaching

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of

rare animals.

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are a number of possible solutions which can be implemented to protect endangered animals.

To begin

with, the main reason for

this

problem is a result of global warming.

In other words

, it causes ocean acidification, which negatively effects on marine life.

Also

loss of natural habitat is a consequence of climate changes. What

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vital role in

extinction

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the extinction

of rare animals, as they kill them for commercial purposes. Current survey carried out at Colorado University has revealed that more than 100,000 of African

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elephants

were hunted by poachers in 2018.

Nevertheless

, there are

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few

effective ways to solve the problem of

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the animal’s

dying out.

Firstly

,

government

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the government

governments

should implement

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strict laws

against hunting on rare animals and selling it on

black market

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the black market

.

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higher

fines for buying products from endangered animals were introduced, demand for them would decline by 76%.

Secondly

, we ought to protect natural habitat by way of creating preserves and stop deforestation. According to the latest publications, 6,500 square

kilometers

a metric unit of length equal to 1000 meters (or 0.621371 miles)

kilometres

of Amazon Rainforest were cut down in 2019, what has led to

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the final extinction

a final extinction

of Spix’s

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long-tailed brilliantly colored parrot of Central America and South America; among the largest and showiest of parrots

macaw

.

Finally

, humanity must take action

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on

global warming in order to stop dying out of nature,

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as it harms

animals and us. In conclusion, while

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the extinction

of animal species is a serious threat to

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the biosphere

and environment, there are a number of steps that can be taken to solve

this

issue.