Write a letter to friend to inform them of a celebration you are having for a recent job promotion. Include information about The promotion The celebration Their accommodation

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Dear Johnson, Recently I have been promoted to the Business Head of my organization. I am writing

this

letter to inform you about the celebration, which I am planning to organize. I was expecting

this

promotion

last

year, but due to the financial crisis, it did not work out.

Last

month, when everything was sorted out financially, my manager had awarded the designation as a reward for my hard work and loyalty towards my organization. I am planning to celebrate my achievement with my friends. I have chosen a pool party with a stay in the hotel.

weekend, we all can meet at 7 PM in the Le Meridian for the bash. I hope you can make it so that we all can enjoy together a long awaiting party. We can party till late

night

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as I had booked the rooms in the hotel for the stay so you will not have tension to drive long hours during late night. I hope to have an enjoyable time together. Yours faithfully, Barry

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

172 words

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The Closing

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