Smoking is gaining widespread popularity among the youth. Discuss the reasons for this problem and give workable solutions.

Smoking is becoming very popular among the younger generation. The essay will
firstly
discuss the reasons for the issue
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Secondly
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give proper solutions.
To begin
with
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smoking is becoming a trend among the youth,
reason
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the reason
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the state or fact of existing
being
, it is
promted
contribute to the progress or growth of
promoted
printed
permitted
in media by actors and actresses as a 'cool thing'
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.
For example
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certain actors are shown smoking in movies which make them look good and are liked by younger people, who try to imitate them. One more reason for smoking to gain popularity among youth is peer
pressure
. The
pressure
to fit in the group causes young people to indulge more in smoking
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For instance
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one friend offers another to smoke and he has to accept in order to fit in the group. My solution to
this
is parents should talk more to
thier
of them or themselves
their
childen
a young person of either sex
children
in
geneal so
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general, so
general so
that children are more open to
thier
of them or themselves
their
parents and never start lying
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This
means having a more friendly relationship between parents and
childen
a young person of either sex
children
.
For example
, parents should keep a touch on what kind of friends
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
child
is hanging out with and
wheather
introduces two alternatives
whether
they are a good company
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if they are not they should alert
thier
of them or themselves
their
third
child
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Secondly
, another solution to
this
smoking problem is knowing if the
child
is under any kind of stress, if yes,
then
talking out and solving his problem
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For instance
, if a
child
is in stress of study because of his parents and he decides to start smoking,
then
talking to that
child
and knowing
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if he feels his parents are putting
pressure
on him, will save him from going on the wrong path. In
conclusion I
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conclusion, I
think smoking is becoming famous among young people due to media and peer
pressure
and workable solutions for the same will be
bieng
the state or fact of existing
being
buying
paying
friendly and talking to our
child
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children
about the types of friends he has and
wheather
introduces two alternatives
whether
, has any kind of stress.
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