In some countries men and women are having children at later age than in the past. What are reasons for this development? Do advantages of this development outweigh disadvantages?

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Presently, in the World, in some countries, people are having their children after few years of their
marriage
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. I will shine some light on
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topic in the essay below.
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, the couple want to become mature enough to handle the infant in a proper way. Take care of their complete health and bring them up in a systematic way.
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could be one possible reason.
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, nowadays many couples are working. They want to secure a good position before the
wife
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takes up the maternity leave and takes the break from the service.
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, The way the world's population is increasing, there is more competition in the jobs and businesses all over the world, except a few countries. Because of
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reason, many married couples are worried and want to secure some assets for their coming children.
On the other hand
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, some couples want to enjoy their married life to the fullest.
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, they use condoms or follow some other methods not to have children in the early days of their married life. Whatever their reasons are, I myself, personally, agree to
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child
the parturition process in human beings; having a baby; the process of giving birth to a child
childbirth
birth
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should be delayed for few years.
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, at the time of our
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marriage my
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marriage, my
wife
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has been just 17 years old. As soon as I got married, my
wife
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became pregnant and gave
birth
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to my elder
son
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. There is an age gap of 2 and half years between my elder
son
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and younger
son
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. My younger
son
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is comparatively more reasonable, smart, has logical reasoning and analysing power. Indeed,
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is a good example that why we must delay
child
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birth
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after
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marriage for few
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marriage for a few
years. By the age of 21 my
wife
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was comparatively little bit matured,
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my 2nd
child
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has more good qualities like what I have discussed above. Some might argue why not delay the
marriage
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itself. Clearly,
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will go against the rules of the nature. After reaching adolescence, we need partners.
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is the divine power's decision. Whenever, we do something against the divine power, the consequences are always adverse. Later marriages lead to girlfriends and boyfriends, cross relations, bad relations etc.
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, to conclude,
marriage
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should happen at an early age and
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child
the parturition process in human beings; having a baby; the process of giving birth to a child
childbirth
birth
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must be delayed in my opinion.
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