Many young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?
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Even though, the travel from rural areas to cities are based on various reasons, I truly believe that the, these have created more negative impacts than positives. The movement of people made cities more congested and now there is no space for them to live or even to build a house. So, they focus on deforestation, eventually disturbing the Linking Words
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