Children have more and more tests and exams to do at school, sometimes starting from the age of 5 or 6, right up until the age of 18. What are the advantage and disadvantage of making children do exams?

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In today’s rapidly developing society, teenagers have to do a numerous of examinations through their childhood up to their adolescent. While I accept that children could benefit from

this

education, I would argue that there

are

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some disadvantage in

this

way of education. In the one hand, I believe that there are serious drawbacks, which outweigh these benefits. It is obvious that at the age of five or six, kids are too small to aware of the

vital

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vitality

most vital

of studying as well as the examinations. At that time, their brain has not completely developed yet, it leads to the subjective evaluation (đánh giá chủ quan) of teachers as well as their parents. From that they could indirectly orient for their children in wrong ways. What’s more, I mention to the pressure of children when they are in the exams. At the age of five or six, children need more time to access

with

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the nature to develop their

creation

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creativity

creative

and imagination as well as playing outdoor activities to enhance their body.

Instead

, today they have to

spent

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spend

almost their whole time staying at home to do their homework and dealing with the tension of

examination period

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the examination period

. It makes them may have an obsession with studying and the word “Exam” may be the nightmare of the lives

for

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most of the students. One of the most realistic illustrations for these is nowadays the high rate of depression children are more and more increasing, it even leads to many

case

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cases

of suicide due to suffering from studying pressure. In the other hand, there are important benefits for having periodic assessments.

First

of all, they could find it easy to know the weak or strong points

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about

kids, children might have the right orientation

from

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for

the adults and being

success

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successful

future

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the future

However

, as I mentioned above, if kids are too small, it will be wrong.

In addition

, the nature of human is

competition

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the competition

, in order to develop, human need a lot of competitions to be promoting.

This

is the reason why periodic examinations

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are

one of the best

way

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ways

for kids to have a strong motivation to study harder and harder to get high marks. To recapitulate, there are a lot of benefits or even serious drawbacks that children should have the periodic assessments, but I believe that it had better endorse the suitable age to force children to do

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an exam

the exam

exams

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Children have more and more tests and exams to do at school, sometimes starting from the age of 5 or 6, right up until the age of 18. What are the advantage and disadvantage of making children do exams?

Fully explain your ideas

Some countries have become much richer than others. Richer countries should now help poorer countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that any cities in the world are now "one big traffic" How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars.

oos are sometimes seen as necessary but poor alternatives to a natural environment. Discuss some of the arguments for and against keeping animals in zoos as an IELTS topic and give your own opinion.

International tourism has brought about enormous benefit to many places .At the same time there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and environment . do disadvantage is outweight than advantages ?

In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?