Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed. However, some people think that zoos are useful for protecting rare animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Zoos are paying important role in the regards of Protection from hunters and
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for endangered Species. Some people argued that zoos should be shut down. Personally, I agree with the Statement, zoos are useful to Protect the rare animals and better feed and care. One the one hand, many feels that zoos are useful in many regards.
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, zoos can help to protect endangered species by keeping them safe from trapper or other threats.
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as, for food consumption and spread of urbanisation and cities.
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, If any animals are facing any serious diseases, it might be possible to care and vaccine to them.
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, zoos are the sources of revenue for government or zoo authorities. So that fund might be helpful for animal's feeding and protecting. It is
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possible to say that zoos are helpful to understanding and knowing about some those animals which are on the edge of extinction and
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can help to raise awareness amongst the public.
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, some people opine that zoos are unnecessary for the following reasons. One might be the zoos are limiting the freedom of animals by locking up in the cages
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of keeping them in their natural habitats
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, it
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that in many zoos, animals are being mistreated as lack of sufficient food and medical care, which has so far caused that animals are dying due to starvation and become ill.
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To conclusion, protecting wild animals is our duty and it may be possible by zoos gets opened
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some species will become extinct in the near future
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • animal welfare
  • conservation
  • captive breeding
  • habitat
  • ethical issues
  • zoochosis
  • endangered species
  • genetic diversity
  • reintroduction programs
  • wildlife education
  • sanctuary
  • natural living conditions
  • artificial environments
  • behavioral enrichment
  • ecosystem
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