Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity.What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity?What solutions can you suggest?

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Despite knowing the
biodiversity
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’s importance for a long time, human practices have been
causing
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caused
to the massive
extinction
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of different species.
This
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essay will examine the primary reasons of
loss
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of
biodiversity
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and possible solutions to
this
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problem.
To begin
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with, there are numerous causes of Being
extinction
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of animals and
loss
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of
biodiversity
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.
First
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and foremost, when humans artificially transform the environment, they come up with the notion of cutting the trees for their personal
fullfilment
a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires
fulfilment
. By doing
frequently
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frequently, such
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practice, number of animals have to apart from their natural habitat.
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, surviving challenges occur of having been out of their natural habitats.
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, in order to be economically strong, each and every nation showing much reliability on setting up more industries, which later become
cause
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a cause
the cause
of
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heaviness
environmental pollution.
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, one of them polluted
water
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, containing chemicals and harmful substances, flushed out into the drainage which mixes up with the river’s
water
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and other reservoirs, and affect them badly. Not only animals have
this
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polluted
water
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, but
also
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this
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water
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becomes the cause of their death. As far as reasons of
loss
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of
biodiversity
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and
animals
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animal
extinction
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are concerned, some plausible ways are
also
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concerned to stop being
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massive
loss
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. The country who
have
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has
has had
faith in nature never expanded as
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developemnts
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
developments
, which are
on
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in
the graves of the forests and animals.
For instance
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, the river Ganga is considered to be very sacred and
it’s
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its
water
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goes
on
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to
different parts of the forest, local houses and industrial purpose. Unfortunately, it’s usage is being decreased because of finding chemical elements in it.
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, many animals are found
dead having
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dead, having
tasted
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polluted
water
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. On
such
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kind of cases, states need to implement strict rules on those industries and others organisations which are responsible in it. As well as, individuals need to make concern about sustaining
biodiversity
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, and on animal
extinction
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. In conclusion, people’s activities that change the environment
have
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has
negative impact on the world’s ecosystem.
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, we can significantly lessen the
extinction
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of species by protecting them and enlightening people about
this
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problem.
Submitted by Ranvir Kaur on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • habitat destruction
  • deforestation
  • urbanization
  • overexploitation
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • invasive species
  • conservation
  • sustainable practices
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • ecosystems
  • species population
  • genetic diversity
  • environmental awareness
  • protected areas
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