In many countries, the quality of life in large cities is becoming worse. What do you think are the causes of this issue? What measures could be taken to solve it?

The life quality in big cities in many countries is becoming worse.
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is obviously caused by some factors and can be solved by taking some actions.
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essay will give a detailed answer on what causes
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and what action can be taken to solve
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. In large cities, the quality of life is becoming worse.
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can be caused by some factors
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as several health issues caused by human activities, busy schedules, eating unhealthy foods, and not getting enough sleep.
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instance, if someone often or regularly eats unhealthy foods, like junk food, they will be sick. The same case for busy schedules and people not getting enough sleep. Environmental issues are
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one of the factors that caused
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issue,
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, air pollutions can damage the local citizen's respiratory system, causing some health issues. A change is needed to solve
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problem, and usually people who have more power are the one who can create a change. The government can take action by creating laws related to
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instance, to reduce pollutions, the government should create a national car-free day, or the government can create a regulation that factories should be far from the city, so that the air in the city is not too polluted. The local citizens can
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help solve
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example, they can start using public transportations
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of using their personal cars, or ride a bike if they are going on a short-distance trip,
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urbanization
  • Overpopulation
  • Infrastructure
  • Pollution
  • Housing shortages
  • Rental and property prices
  • Traffic congestion
  • Public transportation
  • Deforestation
  • Urban sprawl
  • Mental health
  • Economic disparity
  • Waste management
  • Environmental impact
  • Public health
  • Recreational areas
  • Wealth gap
  • Cost of living
  • Lifestyle
  • Stress
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