The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The transformation of

town

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the town

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the

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into the

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town

center

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area is depicted in the two maps. Other than the eastern and western areas which have been left undeveloped , the central part is undergoing noticeable changes mainly through the addition of paths , housing and other facilities.

Firstly

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main

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road , which is in middle is lined with shops , connects opposite sides of the town

center

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and

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allows access to the park and school . shops

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northern

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the northern

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side of the road

supposed

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are supposed

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to be replaced by a bus station , shopping

center

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, car park and new houses.

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main

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road

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going to be ruined and

then

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pavement

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the pavement

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is designed

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. To the north ,

countryside

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the countryside

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will be demolished and new accommodations will be instructed between

park

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, which is smaller than now, and older houses .

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all these buildings and constructions , except

school

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the school

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and living area in

south

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the south

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, are

being

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apply

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surrounded by

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carriageway which is in oval shape .

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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3 paragraphs

169 words

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The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some children spend a long time each day on their smartphones. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?

In many countries paying for things using mobile phones (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?

Some people believe that manufacture and supermarkets have the responsible to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. While others argue that customer should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Some people think that job satisfaction is more important while other people think that a stable job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

You bought a music concert ticket. However, you are unable to go. So you want to offer the ticket to your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: •say about the concert •say why you are unable to go •inform how your friend can receive the ticket