Some people say that education system is the only critical factor to the development of a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Recent years have seen a debate over the

imoportance

the quality of being important and worthy of note

importance

of schooling structure in regards of

progression

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progress

of a nation. A growing number of advocates postulate that education plays an essential role to make a

country

prospereous

in fortunate circumstances financially; moderately rich

prosperous

;

however

, the rest opposes it. Notwithstanding,

this

discourse delves into both standpoints, and

subsequently

, will put forward my own

perspecive

a way of regarding situations or topics etc.

perspective

, in turns. Apparently, the exponents that support the view regarding literacy is supreme aspect which contributes to the enhancement of

region

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the region

or province -have their own justification.

In other words

, a

country

's advancement can be improved in every

aspects

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aspect

such

as: economic and prosperity; health and quality of life; investment and scientific growth along with relationships with neighbour countries and reputation with dignity.

Moreover

, a nation's development is completely depends on literate

yougsters

a young person of either sex

youngsters

or leaders who can take positive decisions towards all citizens. On top of that, the health

awarness

having knowledge of

awareness

can be brought by education only to maintain the

hygien

a condition promoting sanitary practices

hygiene

and disease-free status of life. To exemplify, one research according to the University of London in 2016, 70% of developmental support depended on

educated

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educating

people of a

country

rather than illiterate individuals.

However

, could the other

asects

a distinct feature or element in a problem

aspects

sects

assets

improve the conditions of a province, be absolutely right? It follows that if

government

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the government

provides a budget to the scientific research and health sector, it would bring more

avanced

farther along in physical or mental development

advanced

technologies which contribute directly to the prosperity of a nation. Put differently, the

responsible educated

Accept comma addition

responsible, educated

people are less in numbers who really think about

thier

of them or themselves

their

lands;

hense

(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result

hence

,

budget

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the budget

goes in

curruptions

lack of integrity or honesty (especially susceptibility to bribery); use of a position of trust for dishonest gain

corruption

and bribes to buy

necessities

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the necessities

of life by poorer. To

epotimise

make optimal; get the most out of; use best

optimise

optimize

,

plethora

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a plethora

of people in South Africa

are dying

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is dying

because of not getting enough food and shelters; they need to improve

first

the poverty

instead

of literacy. To conclude, having explored both slants, I reiterate that

definately

without question and beyond doubt

definitely

teaching methods have

impact

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an impact

on a

country

's progression;

eventhough

, the basic needs of people should not be deprived at any cost.