Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals, and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In the contemporary world, some groups believe that plenty of
money
and efforts is spent
on preserving wild animals, others think that Suggestion
are spent
this
huge amount of money
should be used for human life
. While this
suggestion seems to be reasonable, i
firmly refers to the speaker or writer
I
disagee
with be of different opinions
disagree
this
statement.
On the one hand, some people may think money
should be consumed more on human population because of the following reasons. Talking about the first
reason, over the past decades, the population of the earth is rapidly rising,
Accept space
,
however
,
the resources in the world Accept space
,
is
limited, so people who have to suffer from lack of Suggestion
are
money
is at an increasing rate and this
amount of money
can assist them in many aspects of life
. For example
, each year, millions of people do not have a happy life
due to their financial problems. Moreover
, this
group want
to spend more Suggestion
wants
money
on human since they might wanted
to have a better Suggestion
want
life
quality, they may do not the see the benefits of protecting animals, they just need to have more skycrapers
and shopping a very tall building with many stories
skyscrapers
mails
in their cities.
a public area set aside as a pedestrian walk
malls
On the other hand
, i
strongly disagree with that view for a number of grounds. refers to the speaker or writer
I
Firstly
, look after wild animals not only brings a variety of advantages to the wildlife but
Accept comma addition
wildlife, but
also
the atmosphere, animals support the atmosphere in stopping the climate changes which can prevent the earth from many serious disasters such
as drought or melting ice. For instance
, beavers regulation of waterways can save the earth from floods and forest fires. Secondly
, i do not support this
view because in the recent decades, the quality of wildlife is considerably decreasing due to human, so now, they need to have the responsibilities to bring animals home back, if people keep exploiting and do not have any activities which can bring animals certain assistiances then
one day, in the near future, they will revenge. For example
, people profit millions of dollars from wildlife each year.
In conclusion, many people want to concentrate on giving wild animals
protections meanwhile others consider that human Suggestion
animal
life
is a more important factor. In my view, i
think that refers to the speaker or writer
I
this
enormous amount of money
should be invested in animals
preservation than human population.Suggestion
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