Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime. Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce these increasing levels of crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today, some nations are experiencing

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crime

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as time goes by. Many individuals are of the opinion that, placing more police officers on the streets is the key to cut the

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rate.

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, I disagree with

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view and I believe that other more efficient considerations

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in place. On the one hand, the presence of police on the streets may affect the

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rate in a short time and make

arresting

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criminals easier for law

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enforcement, but

is not simply enough to stop wrongdoers from committing the

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, meaning that offenders who either are put into prisons or paid fines are highly likely to re-offend.

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, employing more polices to monitor

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occurrence is just a great burden on the governments in terms of the time and energy consumed. Many Criminals are streetwise and know how to escape while replacing police officers with automated security systems

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as surveillance cameras would be more practical.

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, hiring more polices to track where

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is taking place is far from a perfect solution. When it comes to

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a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others

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, two root causes would arise which should be taken to account in order to reduce or even eradicate different kinds of

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. In the

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place, many people suffer from a lack of education. Governments could prevent

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if they provide free education plus training courses about

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and its implications to raise the awareness of people.

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, recent studies show that

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the majority

a majority

of

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can be curbed if the basic necessities of all people are met. By creating more job opportunities and minimizing poverty

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among

disadvantaged families, they would be able to afford a good standard of living and not turn to commit the

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. To sum up, putting more polices on the street would be only effective when other measures take into consideration.