Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case?What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

In the modern era, more sections of society prefer to be unaffiliated, rather than working in an association. In my opinion, not being manipulated by other people is
one
of the reasons.
However
, various consequences of being self agent
such
as the possible downfall of
business
without even returning the capital and lose of manpower.
To begin
with, there are many advantages of being a boss of your own.
Firstly
, no
one
tells you what you should do, compare of working in a company.
This
can be illustrated by my own experience, I am working in a government hospital and I have many bosses that I need to please and be careful of my action because I may get fired.
Furthermore
, we must follow the rules of
one
organization unlike if
that is
your own
business
, you have your own rules.
In contrast
with all
this
, there are plenty of problems of being non-staff, not every
business
are automatically boom, some struggle and make all of the effort may turn to lose.
For example
,
one
of my relatives lost all their assets because she started her own
business
but it did not work well. Another thing to consider is finding your own staff, demanding salary would be difficult to provide specially if you want your people to stay with you,
as a result
, even you are not earning but you want to keep people with you, you have to sacrifice and take it in your own pocket. In conclusion, even though there are many struggles working in a community, but you don't have to worry of your daily expenses, contrast, if you are self-employed, many things you have to consider.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-employed
  • company
  • organization
  • freedom
  • independence
  • income potential
  • flexibility
  • working hours
  • working location
  • passions
  • interests
  • decision-making
  • business practices
  • disadvantages
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