Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion

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At what extent children should be allowed to take decisions on their activities is a debatable issue.While opponents consider having the youngsters full control of eating
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proponents believe that it has
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allowance could build up
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the confidence
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divisions on their own.I contemplate that parents should control it in a way that their offsprings would enjoy limited flexibility in decision making. Providing freedom to the young
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is because children are too young to make their own choice.If they are permitted to do so on a regular basis
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it is likely that they would grow self-confidence in their behaviour.It would happen due to the fact that they would not learn to consider others' choice while making their own.
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they may not value the preference of others.
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having grown up
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selfishness trait will be embedded in them
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making it difficult to socialize with people.
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providing autonomy on choosing what they prefer can be a vital factor to grow self confidence.
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when parents permit their children to make their own choice
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it is considered as
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the primary lesson
for them to calculate the positive and negative sides of each matter.
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as they build up confidence.
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the fact that 35% of 6th graders are better
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putting some restrictions on them because it will deter them from being self-lov
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Autonomy
  • Consequence-awareness
  • Self-centered
  • Informal decision-making education
  • Child development
  • Age-appropriate choices
  • Cognitive growth
  • Fostering independence
  • Parental guidance
  • Societal norms
  • Interpersonal consideration
  • Balance of freedom
  • Individualism versus collectivism
  • Experience-based learning
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