Public libraries should only provide books and should not waste their limited resources on expensive high-tech media such as software, videos or DVDs. Do you agree or disagree?

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IT IS OFTEN SAID BY SOME THAT

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SHOULD HAVE SOME OPTIONS FOR BOOKS THAN PROVIDING ALTERNATIVES LIKE VIDEO AND AUDIO.

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ESSAY WOULD 100% CONCUR WITH THE ABOVE NOTION DUE TO VARIOUS DETRIMENTAL CONSEQUENCES OF DOING SO.

FIRSTLY

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ESSAY WOULD DISCUSS WHY THERE SHOULD BE ONLY BOOKS AVAILABE RATHER THAN AUDIOS AND VIDEOS TOO,

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, DISCUSS THE MAJOR CONSEQUENCE OF PROVIDING ALL THE MATERIAL INCLUDING HIGH- TECH MEDIA

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. THE MAJOR REASON OF HAVING ONLY BOOKS IN THE

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IS TO GUIDE THE YOUTH IN THE PROPER DIRECTION THAT THEY CAN USE THEIR VALUABLE TIME FOR THE ESSENTIAL CHORES

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OF MAKING TIME WORTHLESS.

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WOUDL HELPS THEM IN BUILDING A SECURE UPCOMING YEARS.

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, ACCORDING TO THE AUTHORITY OF THE AUSTRALIA, 70% OF THE AUSTRALIAN

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ONLY HAVE BOOKS RELATED TO ACADEMIC PURPOSE AND THE GENERAL PUBLIC

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HAVE A LESS EDUCATIONAL BURDEN.

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, IF

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HAS EVERYTHING INCLUDING GAMING AND RELAXING MATERIALS, YOUTH WOULD ONLY FOCUS ON THAT EQUIPMENT AND BECOME LACK ATTENTIVE IN THE STUDY SECTION.

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WOULD MAKE THEM ILLITERATES AND DESTROY THEIR OWN LIFE.

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, AS PER THE USA UNIVERSITY SURVEY, 80% OF THE AMERICAN ADULTS WASTE THEIR TIME ON PLAYING GAMES IN THE

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INSTEAD

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OF STUDYING. IN CONCLUSION,

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INDEED HELPS NEEDY INDIVIDUALS TO ACCESS THE BOOKS AND ALL TO THEM WHO ARE UNABLE TO AFFORD THE EXPENSE.

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, THE INDIVIDUALS ARE OBTAINING NEGATIVE INFLUENCE OF THAT WOULD RUIN THEIR

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LIVELIHOOD.

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, TO STOP

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DESASTER,

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SHOULD ONLY HAVE BOOKS AVAILABLE.

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