In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Other believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
public
not private; open to or concerning the people as a whole
Public
transportaion
is a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods
transportation
one
of the most important infrastructures in any city
. By having uptodate
and new commuting reflecting the latest information or changes
up-to-date
system
as well as new vehicles residents can enjoy living in peace in smooth way. Some argue that providing new railroads and high-speed train
in town is indispensible
even with paying large amount of money, whereas others, including myself, not to be dispensed with; essential
indispensable
belive
that accept as true; take to be true
believe
believes
believed
budget
of the municipality should be dedicated to current Suggestion
the budget
pulic
not private; open to or concerning the people as a whole
public
police
transportaion
as it is much more cost-effectivea facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods
transportation
.
Some group Accept space
.
argue
that fast subways and new railways are essential for smooth commutingSuggestion
argues
,
so it deserves to consume a large amount of Accept space
,
city
hall's income. Nowadays people need faster transport
system
because they prefer to avoid stucking
in extending out above or beyond a surface or boundary
sticking
sucking
trafic
jams and reach to their workplace as soon as possible and if municipality pay a lot for it it worth it as at the end it will save money and time for citizens. In Tokyo, the aggregation of things (pedestrians or vehicles) coming and going in a particular locality during a specified period of time
traffic
for example
, 80% of people use turbo train
,
which has cost 100 billion dollars to build, but overall Accept space
,
governemnt
and people are the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
exteremely
satisfied as everybody to a high degree or extent; favorably or with much respect
extremely
reach
Suggestion
reaches
ontime
to the work place.I Suggestion
on time
belive
that spending that much amount for accept as true; take to be true
believe
train
is unnecessary and there is a more cost-Suggestion
the train
eefective
way to improve producing or capable of producing an intended result or having a striking effect
effective
affective
transport
Suggestion
the transport system
transport systems
system
.
one
the other hand, some individuals and I Suggestion
One
belive
that with spending less money people can take the most of the current accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
transport
Suggestion
transportation
system
.In
most of the time just Suggestion
At
city
require
more new buses with up-to-date technologySuggestion
requires
.
Accept space
.
More public vehicle
on the road, more inhabitants are able to arrive their destinations.Suggestion
More public vehicles
The more public vehicle
Moreover
, budget
Suggestion
the budget
that is
needed for upgrading current commute system
is much more affordable.The clear example can be find
in Delhi, which with more than Suggestion
can be found
hundred million people
Suggestion
a hundred million people
,
does not have fast-trains or Accept space
,
railways but
the Accept comma addition
railways, but
city
's traffic goes smoothly duo to 100,000 new buses which cost just one
billion dollars ,
exactly Accept space
,
one
percent of Tokyo.
In conclusion,
in some cities ultra-speed Accept space
,
train
helps residents to reach their workplaces,
while in others lots of buses do the same task. Accept space
,
Although
supe
-lube of the highest quality
super
train
seems to assist people to escape traffic jams on the roads,
I strongly Accept space
,
belive
that accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
duo
it cost, which sometime Suggestion
the duo
reahces
Suggestion
raises'
reaches
to
hundred times of buying new buses, is not a smart choice for municipality and being one more than one
two
instead
upgrading current transport
system
is much better idea
.By saving a budget by Suggestion
a much better idea
this
way, city
hall can spend much more on other city
infrastructures like ,
community centres and amusement parks.Accept space
,
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