Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

In
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century
recycle
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have been
contraversy
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one of
major
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solution
of
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environment
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issue.
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in reality in most
countries
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recycling is not required mandatorily.
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voluntarily
implimented
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implemented
environment allows
people
not to recycle.
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some
people
argue that
recycle
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must be
regislated
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regulated
legislated
by
law
. In south korea and
japan
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where recycling is strictly
implimented
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implemented
,
recycling
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the recycling
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rate is over 90% Obviously some reason
of
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this
high rated
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recycling is there
is
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to some degree recycling related
law
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laws
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have been legislated, but cultural context can not be ignorable. 1. Recycling
trash
space is
euipped
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equipped
everywhere in
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these
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two
countries
so
people
naturally recycle
trash
regardless of domestic
trash
or
trash
from school or company. Meanwhile, in
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case
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of
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the UK
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UK
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, normally there is
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a distinct
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distinct
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a distinct
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system
of recycling as I experienced. In
school
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trash
bin is
separed
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separated
by
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recycleable
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recyclable
and normal
trash
but as for domestic
trash
without
choice
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choice,
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i
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could not recycle as there is no proper place for recycling. Compared to tow mentioned
countries
where recycling place is everywhere and recycling item is specified as paper,plastic, glass and can,
normal
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and normal
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trash
, relatively recycling
system
is not complete in other
countries
. Despite of strict
system
, probably without
law
, recycling could not be mandatorily implemented. In reality in Korea, some
law
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laws
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related
recycling
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to recycling
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is
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legislated
already
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recyclable
trash
into normal
trash
can be charged 50,000 which is equivalent to 50$.
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those related
law
is not specified yet.
People
are rather following rule which is like habit as they follow from when they
was
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young and
othe
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other
people
do
furthermore
schools are
learning
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recycle as moral education.
To sum up
,
refering
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referring
to
case
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the case
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in Korea,
obviously
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at some
point
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people
are following
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because
law
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is legislated.
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prior to
recycle related
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recycling-related
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law
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laws
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,
people
have recycled since
when
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they were born and learnt from school
furthermore
all
system
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systems
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are completely equipped everywhere. So prior to legislation of related recycling.
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education from
doth
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both
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domestic and society and
complete
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a complete
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syste
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system
should be required.
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