Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

In the present
society
where fulled with regulations and laws, people considered that the essential reason why those stuff
are needed
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is needed
. Some sets of people believe that laws and
regulation
of human behaviours play a crucial role in
this
society
,
however
, some folks argue that let people do what they want without restriction of laws. To illustrate my view, I cannot accept that let people free, a bunch of regulations and laws made our
society
better. Admittedly. I partly agree with the argument that people do not need any
regulation
. In the
first
play, all
citizen
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citizens
has the
right
to what they want to do.
For example
, every person can do anything
such
as, posting
one
's political opinion in a personal blog or arguing some tiny related to political issue with others. If the government watch every population's social network or every chatting,
then
the human
right
that everyone can speak or write their own through freely is restricted.
As a result
, from the perspective of the
citizen
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citizen's
right
, the
regulation
should be minimized,
Nevertheless
, I, as
one
of the opponents of
this
view, believe that rules and laws play
pivotal role
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a pivotal role
in
this
competitive
society
.
First
of all, as far as the human nature is concerned, I cannot deny that all humankind is selfish and always crave
one
's interest
first
than others. Given that there is no
regulation
in
this
city,
then
it
turn
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turns
into the car
o s
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os
,
in other words
, the man in the power will be
monopoly
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monopolizing
the community, and the bottom of the social status will
demolished
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demolish
their life. Another reason worth mentioning is that the function of the laws, it not only protect
one
's life but
also
prevent various crimes. More specifically, greedy people can not willing to steal some tiny from others,
this
is because the fear of a strict punishing will makes them live in a
right
way. In conclusion, the laws and rules make feel chocked personal life and freedom, on the flip side, it is the fundamental of our
society
and promises with every citizen,
consequently
.
the
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The
government and ministry should protect
populations safety
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the population's safety
population's safety
through the laws.
Submitted by DAMUL YANG on

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  • social order
  • harmonious
  • individual freedoms
  • societal norms
  • unrestricted freedom
  • crime rates
  • dysfunctional
  • fair distribution
  • human rights
  • justice system
  • accountability
  • enforcing laws
  • restrictive regulations
  • societal functionality
  • legal frameworks
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