An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Nowadays, online shopping is becoming more popular among all buyers throughout the world.
Although
sometimes
this
type of shopping might be dangerous, I believe it's benefits overweight the drawbacks. On the one
hand
, it is acceptable that online shopping has some shortcomings.
First
of all, development of
such
a trend goes
hand
in
hand
with an increase in the number of hackers, stealing online shopper's property. People
,
Accept space
,
who bought things they need
on
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for
websites, accede to all requirements of service provider and unintentionally can become a victim of thieving on the internet. To be more exact, despite all efforts
done
produced by a manufacturing process
made
to keep online
shopper's
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shoppers'
private data
confidentially
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confidential
, many hackers are developing and using
the newest
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the new
high-
quallity
an essential and distinguishing attribute of something or someone
quality
programs, which are able to get these data easily and
tracklessy
having no tracks
trackless
. So online shopping can be dangerous if
u
second person pronoun; the person addressed
you
have large sums in your personal account.
Secondly
, the money can
also
be stolen by companies by offering
people
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peoples'
peoples
products, which are poor in quality. In
this
case, many people get dissatisfied with the real product they received, claiming that the view of
product
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the product
was better on the website where they bought it.
On the other
hand
, there are more beneficial aspects of online shopping, I believe. Today a lot of people, who are very busy working a lot, highly appreciate the value of online shopping, as
this
kind creates
greater level
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a greater level
of convenience and comfort. People can buy from product for everyday use to
apartment
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an apartment
or a car online while they have
coffee break
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a coffee break
coffee breaks
,
for example
. In my opinion, nobody wants to pass
such
a
chanse
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
chance
change
to save
some time up
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up some time
.
Moreover
, usually online shopping enables consumers to get an access to
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
rare goods like books, equipment, devices, clothes from designers and especially medicals. In
medical field
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the medical field
, online shopping plays
big role
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a big role
, because it gives an access for some slowly developing countries to buy valuable medicines from leading countries, where medicine is well developed. In conclusion, despite some
bariers
a structure or object that impedes free movement
barriers
berries
barrels
and disadvantages, online shopping is becoming popular among modern society of consumers and
this
, I believe, is far
advantageous
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more advantageous
.
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